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Conflict is better when the people are closer to one another

Posted on May 25, 2011 at 5:00 AM by Alan Sitomer

I was speaking to my literary agent the other day on the telephone and as we were discussing the plot of my book Nerd Girls Book II: The Return of the Nerd Herd, he said something really that really caught my ear. It was something that I think I always knew, but I’m not sure if I always really consciously knew I knew it.

He was speaking about conflict in the text of a novel and about how I should attempt to more deeply explore a few of the vibrant, confrontational interactions between the characters. And then he hit me with this small but very simple – and certainly spot on – gem.

“Conflict is better when it occurs between two people who are close with one another. The hero battling an enemy that they don’t personally know is good, but a father battling a son is always better.”

–Albert Zuckerman, Founder Writers House Literary Agency, New York, New York

It was one of those “click” moments for me. Like I said, I think I always knew on some level that conflict between people who are close – fights between parents and kids, siblings, best friends – is better than conflict with people the protagonist does not intimately know in the first place. And this small, almost offhand comment, really helped me see where I could get more thrust out of the text.

Now, since Nerd Girls Book II was already fully written when he mentioned this to me, it wasn’t one of those moments where I thought, “Oh my goodness, I need to go back and rewrite the whole darn thing.” I already had a good amount of “stuff” going on between all the principals in the book. But for my next pass at the text (after a first draft is done, it goes to my agent and my editor to read – where I will do at least 5 more passes of the book, some more extensive than others but usually I get about 85% of it right on the first go. That last 15%, however, makes an IMMENSE difference, like night and day, and I wouldn’t pass up the chance to do my re-writes for the world) I saw where I could find more energy and dynamism in the story. It was kind of like eating crab for dinner, where you work and work and work to crack the shell, and peel away the stuff and then BOOM! you discover one of those nuggets of crab meat that just makes the whole really good meal you’ve been eating that much better.

Funny, but when we hung up, I instantly thought about the movie Star Wars. I mean Star Wars is literally as big as big gets in the world of story. After all, it’s blazed into the collective experience of an entire generation, if not two, and its commercial success is practically unparalleled.  And yet, what is the most iconic line in the entire franchise?

“Luke, I am your father.”

I mean that’s the moment when suddenly, things get so deep for our hero that we realize, I’m not sure if I can handle this right now. I mean holy macaroni, you’re telling me that the Prince of Darkness, the most feared villain in the galaxy, the most heartless, soulless, terrifying entity in all the realm is the hero’s father? How in the world is good supposed to fight against evil when good’s father is evil incarnate?

And then I learn that this evil father used to be good… before he became wise in the ways of the world and discovered the power of the dark side of the force and now, our hero, the good guy, hero is being tempted to do the very same thing and cross over to the dark side right at this very instant.

If Darth Vader was merely an evil overlord, I am not sure Star Wars becomes the mutli-generational phenomenon it’s become. But when Darth Vader turns out to be the hero’s dad – the father versus son theme of which my agent spoke earlier – that kind of conflict resonates at the deepest level possible in the world of writing and story.

Who is the antagonist? Can you make them “closer” to the hero in some way?

Where is the harmony in the protagonist’s intimate relationships within the text? Where can you bring out more disharmony? After all, it’s way more interesting to watch people fight than it is to watch them get along.

Think about it… you can’t really be betrayed by someone you don’t know. However, if your best friend sells you out and turns out to be a backstabbing liar and suddenly you and that person are forced to interact once again… that’s when things get interesting.

Brother vs. Brother. There is a reason its such an enduring storyline from The Civil War.

It should be noted that I also began to question why this kind of conflict with your intimates seems to resonate so well with audiences. The answer I came up with was fairly simple: it’s because we all fight with our families. I mean who doesn’t know what it’s like to have their mother drive them crazy? Who doens;t know what it’s like to be deeply angry at your dad?

No one can hurt you like your family. They know all your secrets, they know how to push your buttons and when they fight, they rarely seem to fight fair, always going for that one spot which lives inside of you which you wish no one would ever touch.

Well, in the real world, you hate having it touched. But in the world of fiction, you LOVE seeing it touched in the lives of the characters about whom you deeply care.

Touch that note, that hurt, that place which can only be accessed in your characters by people with whom they are close. That’s when stories get juicy.

Why I chose to publish for the eReading format before the traditional print format for my newest book.

Posted on January 4, 2011 at 5:00 AM by Alan Sitomer

I have blogged extensively as to how the iPad changed my perceptions about reading, technology, media consumption, educational opportunities and, well… all kinds of things. I’ve talked about how I was a
skeptic until I held the thing in my hands. And then I bought myself an iPad
within the first 2 weeks it was out and I haven’t looked back since.

As it turns out, the iPad changed my perceptions of being a professional writer as well. (An unexpected insight.) Doing something “different” with my newest book Cinder-Smella thus became
an appealing idea to me once I had written the text.

First, a little history about me as an author. I’ve now published in a variety of ways. I’ve self-published, I’ve published with the big dogs in the industry (Disney, Scholastic, RB Education, Penguin) and I’ve
blogged for two years now (a form of modern-day publishing for sure) at a
fairly voluminous rate.

In essence, after having written Cinder-Smella the opportunity arose for me to invert the traditional publishing paradigm… so I decided to go for it with this book.

I’ll explain.

For hundreds of years books have become manifest through being printed and bound. Nowadays, eBooks offer people the opportunity to not print or bind a physical book but rather publish it in a digital text format.

But in the world of picture books, I saw a clear imbalance between the quality of the final product and user experience. While reading a book like Freakonomics or Pride and Prejudice on a Kindle, Nook,
iPad (or what-not) is somewhat of an apples-to-apples user experience (yes,
they are different but the two reading experiences are somewhat in the same
ballpark) reading a picture book such as Green
Eggs and Ham
or Knuffle Bunny in
physical form versus Kindle, Nook, iPad, or so-on, is not an apples-to-apples
experience. Clearly, the printed picture book trumps the eBook experience (in
my opinion).

Of course, nowadays we are seeing an explosion of children’s book apps that allow kids to paint within the book, have the story be read to them via the character’s voice, and interact with the text in all sorts of
enhanced, digital ways. But (again, in my opinion) comparing apps to printed
books is not an apples-to-apples experience either.

(NOTE: I am not weighing in on “which is better”; I am just saying they are not comparable as the user interface differential is too great.)

But what if I crafted Cinder-Smella to be an apples-to-apples picture book experience much like Freakonomics is an apples-to-apples reading experience? This idea intrigued me a lot. 

That’s when I realized that what I was really talking about was writing the first children’s picture book specifically designed for the Kindle.

As it currently stands, e-ink screens are awesome… but they are not all in color and reading a picture book is often a lesser experience on eReading devices. But that’s only because I had not yet seen anyone construct a
picture book with the Kindle (and other eReaders) specifically in mind.

And so, with my publishers at eReadia (a new company formed in the past year that believes – and really gets – the digital reading revolution) we decided to try and break new ground.

Indeed, innovation excites me.

The question became, could we format Cinder-Smella so that grandparents and parents with Kindles and iPads and Nooks and so on could read a picture book with their little ones that didn’t feel like a second rate experience?

Clearly, all writers today are thinking about how eReading is going to impact the way our audiences have access to the works we create. So for me, publishing Cinder-Smella in a
digital format first – and then publishing it in a printed book format second –
struck me as an interesting way to dip my toes in the waters of a quickly
shifting landscape while still working hard to publish and author high quality material.

So yes, Cinder-Smella represents my (perhaps, the) first children’s picture book specifically designed to be a kick-butt reading experience on the Kindle. (Clearly, the iPad offers a reading experience that is downright wicked
– the color Nook, as well – but they are designed to be different machines than
the Kindle.)

So far, the reviews for Cinder-Smella have been great but clearly this project represents a new way of doing things in this new era of publishing. Printed books are coming, but the digital has
arrived first with this title.

And don’t think that I don’t realize that without a printed book, there is a “stigma” attached to the publication. More on the perceptions of printed books versus digital books tomorrow.

Diary of a Wimpy Kid – A Smart Choice!!

Posted on March 15, 2010 at 9:42 AM by Alan Sitomer

Diary of a Wimpy Kid is about to absolutely rock the Hollywood box office this weekend. And it has been a rip-roaring success in the world of book publishing. As a teacher, when I see this I know that I can leverage the power of an author who has found a way to reach real kids into classroom success for me and my kids.

Here’s how I do it.

First of all, I know that the state has hired me to teach the content standards. (They clearly say so.) And when they assess my student performance, the material they test is not text specific but rather, standards-based. This means that they are not going to be testing my kids on Kafka, Twain, and Joyce but rather on denotation vs. connotation, theme, tone and so on.

And hey, Diary of a Wimpy Kid uses all of the literary elements of denotation vs. connotation, theme, tone and so on. So why not use Diary of a Wimpy Kid as a text to teach the standards in my classroom?

I do.

Now before I get crucified as being someone that does not revere the GREAT BOOKS of human civilization – a canon blaster, if you will — please take a few things into consideration.

California is a state with 6.4 million students. And 1.6 million of them are English Language Learners. This means that I need to differentiate, accommodate and be responsive to the real literary needs of the students that are sitting in my class — all while still teaching the appropriate grade level content standards.

I am not sure if there is a more accessible book for English Language Learners out there right now than Diary of a Wimpy Kid.

-It’s funny. (And kids will wrestle with text when the reward is material that will make them laugh).
-There’s a lot of white space on the page. (Check the research on the value of that to a student with low literacy skills – especially when English is not their first language).
-It’s relevant and kids relate. (The bumbling, fumbling shenanigans of Greg allow students to see their own lives reflected directly in the text.)

And Diary of a Wimpy Kid (for those who want to take a moment to jump off their high horse of that books in school absolutely must be dense, erudite art) is a good read. Personally, I greatly enjoyed it because it’s an energetic, funny and page turner.

Plus, guess what? There’s a theme. (A few of them, in fact: 1) We learn from our mistakes. 2) Self-image is very important. 3) No one escapes problems in their life. 4) You’ve got to show initiative if you are going to get anywhere in this world.)

And there are examples of denotation vs. connotation.

And the text provides me examples of tone, perspective, hyperbole and on and on.

The same stuff that the standards ask me to teach.

Should Diary of a Wimpy Kid replace Mark Twain? Nope, not even close. But can it be used as a bridge to build capacity? Can it be used as a text to illuminate literary devices?

Can it be used as a vehicle to get 100% of your class to do ALL the assigned reading? (And how often do our classes do that? I mean “faking it” through books has become so ingrained in our culture that there’s a multi-million dollar industry to provide resources as to how to better fake it — Cliff’s Notes, Spark Notes, Pink Monkey and so on.)

Yes, I read Diary of a Wimpy Kid with my classes. And guess what? It was a home-run success and a great teaching tool.

And guess what else?

We had FUN!

Since when are fun and and learning mutually exclusive to one another?

But, don’t worry — keep using those 20th century tools to reach today’s 21rst century kids. After all I am sure Hollywood is going to race right out and make a movie of your classroom textbook any day this week.

Diary of a Wimpy Kid… it certainly can have it’s place in a classroom where students are achieving.

Teaching the Standards

Posted on April 13, 2009 at 8:30 PM by Alan Sitomer

One thing to really ensure that you nail the standards is to start with them. Don’t start with the methodology (as many educators do), start with the language arts standard, figure out the assessment and then determine how you will teach it. This is how you really lock in and make sure you hit your academic objective dead on.

For example, most teachers start with the methodology (i.e. they are going to teach a book like Dracula) and then they figure out what they are going to teach (i.e. they’ll teach symbolism) and then they figure out how to assess (i.e. I’ll give a quiz or project on symbolism.) As a Professor of Secondary Methodology in the Language Arts at Loyola Marymount University, I had to learn to teach teachers that when you teach kids in this manner, it’s not really the ideal way to make sure that you, as the educator, are drilling the core content standards the way you ought to.

Best to go…
1. Standards
2. Assessment
3. Methodology

This way you will know what you are teaching and you will know how you will measure whether or not you successfully taught it before you determine the materials you will use to do the teaching. (And this is why the standards are not text specific — more on that in a minute.)

Let’s look at it…

1. Decide to teach CA Language Arts Standards 3.7 (10th grade): Recognizing and Understanding the Significance of Symbolism in a text.
2. Have students identify, re-create (through a drawing, clip art, magazine pictures, and so on) and present a symbol from the text via the original creation of an independent poster board project.
3. Read Chapters 1 – 4 in Dracula and utilize this material as the basis for the assignment on symbolism.

Or you can use Twilight. Or you can use Monster. Or you can use Speak, The Outsiders or Freak the Mighty.

This is why the standards are, once again, not text specific. Find a book that engages your students and the standards can be a very valuable tool to make sure that you are focused like a laser on real classroom objectives while teaching high interest literature at the same time.

Oh how I wish someone had taught this to me when I first became a teacher. It’s made my life so much easier — and my classroom practice so much more effective.

If I’ve said it once, I’ve said it a thousand times, the standards are, for me, like a northern star, my unwavering compass as I try all kinds of crazy, far-reaching stuff to stretch my students’ minds.

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